Write Your Technical Documents with Consistent Voice and Mood
Technical writing is consistent writing, whether you’re writing software or marketing specs.
Your sentences need to be consistent in
- Voice
- Mood
- Case
- Tense
- Style
If you end your sentences with the same mood, voice and tense that you start them with, the battle is already won. [Which rule did this sentence violate already?]
Technique 1) Write with a consistent VOICE
If you start with active voice, end with active voice; or vice versa.
EXAMPLE: “I’d like to complain [ACTIVE] but I’m not allowed [PASSIVE] to criticize the Board.”
BETTER: “I’d like to complain [ACTIVE] but the club rules don’t allow [ACTIVE] me to criticize the Board.”
Technique 2) Write in a consistent MOOD
Stick to the same mood from one clause to another, or start a new sentence.
EXAMPLE: “Work hard [IMPERATIVE] and that’s how you’ll become successful [INDICATIVE].”
BETTER 1: “Work hard [IMPERATIVE] and achieve success [IMPERATIVE].”
BETTER 2: “Work hard [IMPERATIVE]. That’s the formula for success [INDICATIVE in a new sentence].”