Eliminate Adverbs and Improve Your Writing

© Ugur Akinci You can improve your writing right away by eliminating all the unnecessary adverbs. 1) Eliminate adverbs by using a correct verb instead. EXAMPLE: “He walked into the room cockily.” BETTER: “He swaggered into the room.” EXAMPLE “She walked into the room confidently.” BETTER: “She sashayed into the room.” EXAMPLE: “He looked threateningly.”…

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Google's Translation Service: How Good Is It?

© Ugur Akinci I’m fascinated by Google’s translation service since it promises to translate texts among over three dozen languages, including some quite exotic ones. So I decided to test the reliability of Google’s translation engine by performing a simple test. 1) I took two sentences in English and translated them into a foreign language…

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When to Use Jargon in a Technical Document?

Introduction As a technical writer you’ve heard this piece of sage writing advice a thousand times: you should stay away from jargon and write as you speak. It’s basic. Strunk & White said so, didn’t they? It’s true. But is this rule true ALL the time, unconditionally? No, I’m afraid it is not. Life has…

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How to Improve Your Technical Copy by Editing "Trash Can Sentences"

You can improve your technical copy instantly by staying away from sentences with a long RANDOM list of objects. I call them “trash can sentences.” Here is a technical copy example: “The Committee will meet Thursday morning to discuss building permits, hiring practices, derivatives trading, inventory, Thanksgiving recess, product modeling, labor issues, Caribbean resorts, IPO…

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Is Technical Writing "Boring" ?

One traditional complaint leveled at technical writing is that it’s “boring.” I obviously strongly disagree with that charge and I’ll explain why. Personal Disclosure But first a necessary personal disclosure: yes, I do love technical communication with a passion but that’s of course NOT the only thing in life that I like intensely. For example,…

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